Hi Hadlee! It was pretty good, only thing is the slides went too fast so I couldn't read them all. The music and pictures were good though. Overall it was a good effort but you needed to slow the transitions down.
Casey here, your slides were definitely not long enough, especially the last slides of your conclusion which is only 1 second! I liked all your posts, and how you kept the same pictures for one of the verses. I couldn't see the text very well on one of your first posts, because it was too small. I didn't find any spelling mistakes, and I really liked your music choice. It fit the tone of your poem. You summed it up nicely at the end, but like I said before you could not read it if you didn't pause the video as it was going to fast!!! Overall if it was slowed down it was really good.
Hi Hadlee! It was pretty good, only thing is the slides went too fast so I couldn't read them all. The music and pictures were good though. Overall it was a good effort but you needed to slow the transitions down.
ReplyDeleteI think the slides were to short and I often missed the last few words
ReplyDeleteCasey here, your slides were definitely not long enough, especially the last slides of your conclusion which is only 1 second! I liked all your posts, and how you kept the same pictures for one of the verses. I couldn't see the text very well on one of your first posts, because it was too small. I didn't find any spelling mistakes, and I really liked your music choice. It fit the tone of your poem. You summed it up nicely at the end, but like I said before you could not read it if you didn't pause the video as it was going to fast!!! Overall if it was slowed down it was really good.
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